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Unformatted text preview: No conclusion, probably ran out of time Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Could be more sophisticated, but paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5835/97017b7d7f69cc31c25d7bd526c0a1470b95625c.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Sometimes awkward phrasing (An example would be the prince in Beauty and the Beast in the very beginning, before the curse. An example would take place in the beginning of Beauty and the Beast , before the prince is cursed. Overall impressions-Good thesis, but make sure you have two strong examples from literature, history, or current events and only elaborate on those to make sure you have a thorough elaboration-Good grammar but watch out for awkward phrasing //home/vdimitrov/5835/97017b7d7f69cc31c25d7bd526c0a1470b95625c.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11