This preview has intentionally blurred sections. Sign up to view the full version.View Full Document
Unformatted text preview: conclusion Organization: -Great organization-Use transitions between body paragraphs -Make sure you mention examples in introduction and conclusion Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Great vocabulary Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5825/27d6faf2fb8e061cde98d059bafe89aaa91a7c10.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Overall good grammar, but minor spelling mistakes (“judgment,” not “judgement”) Overall impressions-Good thesis and strong examples! //home/vdimitrov/5825/27d6faf2fb8e061cde98d059bafe89aaa91a7c10.docx 6/10/11...
View Full Document
- Spring '11
- Writing, Judgment, Grammar & Usage, Ivy Review