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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1699 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3.67 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Unique but good thesis - Good examples! - Would have been more effective if mentioned the examples in introduction and
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Unformatted text preview: conclusion Organization: -Great organization-Use transitions between body paragraphs -Make sure you mention examples in introduction and conclusion Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Great vocabulary Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5825/27d6faf2fb8e061cde98d059bafe89aaa91a7c10.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Overall good grammar, but minor spelling mistakes (judgment, not judgement) Overall impressions-Good thesis and strong examples! //home/vdimitrov/5825/27d6faf2fb8e061cde98d059bafe89aaa91a7c10.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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