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Unformatted text preview: Organization: -Great organization and good use of transitions-Conclusion a bit abrupt, make sure you recap your supporting arguments Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Great vocabulary, paper flows well Grammar & Usage-Good grammar Overall impressions-Strong examples and paper was easy to follow //home/vdimitrov/5959/d27360e76a0d7a13d9d4ecc8c06e4a950128fe2d.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Conclusion kind of lacking, make sure you do a good job of recapping your supporting arguments to help tie up your essay //home/vdimitrov/5959/d27360e76a0d7a13d9d4ecc8c06e4a950128fe2d.docx 6/10/11...
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