1819.predx_TKedited

1819.predx_TKedited - IvyReview

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1819 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2.67 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Wrong interpretation of the prompt (about materialism), but the thesis used was well supported by examples - Make sure you mention examples and briefly how they support the thesis in introduction and conclusion to make a stronger argument - Elaborate more on the first example (balance between the length of first and second body paragraphs)
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