This preview has intentionally blurred sections. Sign up to view the full version.View Full Document
Unformatted text preview: -Organization should be introduction (hook, thesis, and introduction of two examples) body paragraphs conclusion Use of sentences-A lot of run-ons Choice of words -Vocabulary could be more sophisticated, but language was formal enough to let the paper flow well-Don’t use ‘you’ in essay //home/vdimitrov/5861/5dc50096cd41956b894d1a1cdaa2604410199ec9.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Grammar & Usage-Don’t start a sentence with ‘but’-Spelling errors: “judgment,” not “judgement” Overall impressions-No examples, paper is quite disoriented—choose a side and stick with it-Paper should be two pages long //home/vdimitrov/5861/5dc50096cd41956b894d1a1cdaa2604410199ec9.docx 6/10/11...
View Full Document
This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.
- Spring '11