1989.bb1_TKedited - -First sentence for second body...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1989 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3.83 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Excellent thesis and strong examples! Organization: - Great organization, but make sure you use transitions between paragraphs
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Unformatted text preview: -First sentence for second body paragraph about Animal Farm is a bit irrelevant; use something like In addition, the pigs in Animal Farm also rebelled against authority. Use of sentences-Good exchange of complex and simple sentences Choice of words -Vocabulary could be more sophisticated, but language was formal enough to let the paper flow well Grammar & Usage-Good grammar! Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5908/7d0a5f1fb0ab4b6147e1597a60854cd24b25904c.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Great thesis and strong examples, paper flowed very well //home/vdimitrov/5908/7d0a5f1fb0ab4b6147e1597a60854cd24b25904c.docx 6/10/11...
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