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Unformatted text preview: -First sentence for second body paragraph about Animal Farm is a bit irrelevant; use something like In addition, the pigs in Animal Farm also rebelled against authority. Use of sentences-Good exchange of complex and simple sentences Choice of words -Vocabulary could be more sophisticated, but language was formal enough to let the paper flow well Grammar & Usage-Good grammar! Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5908/7d0a5f1fb0ab4b6147e1597a60854cd24b25904c.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Great thesis and strong examples, paper flowed very well //home/vdimitrov/5908/7d0a5f1fb0ab4b6147e1597a60854cd24b25904c.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11