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Unformatted text preview: Organization: -Great organization, but make sure you use transitions between paragraphs Use of sentences-Good exchange of complex and simple sentences Choice of words -Great vocabulary, paper flowed well Grammar & Usage-Good grammar! Overall impressions-Great thesis and strong examples, paper flowed very welljust make sure you use transitions //home/vdimitrov/5887/eaaccee9439cc48ffda8a2f4cd0455a7271c8912.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Elaborate more on examples and connect them more to thesis //home/vdimitrov/5887/eaaccee9439cc48ffda8a2f4cd0455a7271c8912.docx 6/10/11...
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