Unformatted text preview: My classmate made an accurate judgment that the article is written in a biased manner. The author is biased toward women although she is ultimately correct in her statements. She is a credible source as she is the former United States Undersecretary of Energy. The co-author is the President of Earth Day Network. I used direct feedback approach. I found a few grammar errors in the writing. It may be beneficial to re-read what they have written. For example nonprofits is spelled as one word, no hyphen. Using the statement, “I feel” is vague; try using “believe” or “think.”...
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- Spring '10
- President of the United States, United States Undersecretary, ty Peer Viewed, global green world