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Unformatted text preview: making your last argument. Wrap up your points smoothly and make a good final impression on the readers. Where is the writing unclear or vague? First paragraph doesn’t quite state what is being researched. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? Examples of how to make foods tasty and healthy. What other comments might you provide for the author? I would focus more on foods that are healthy for the body and how they improve the body *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150 COM 150...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course COM 150 150 taught by Professor Courtright during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '10