appendix g - making your last argument Wrap up your points...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? Preparing food that is wholesome and has more nutrients, does not sacrifice flavor and makes eating healthy simple. What is the greatest strength of this essay? All of the examples that are provided for certain foods to make them healthier. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Introduction is missing. Adding some background information and a summary of the main points the paper discusses. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The roasting of foods. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. The conclusion. You do not want to stop writing abruptly after
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Unformatted text preview: making your last argument. Wrap up your points smoothly and make a good final impression on the readers. Where is the writing unclear or vague? First paragraph doesn’t quite state what is being researched. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? Examples of how to make foods tasty and healthy. What other comments might you provide for the author? I would focus more on foods that are healthy for the body and how they improve the body *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150 COM 150...
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