Week 3 Assignment 2

Week 3 Assignment 2 - Welcome to WritePoint, the automated...

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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Assignment 1: University [Except in a title, do not capitalize the first word after a colon unless it begins a complete clause] [Do not capitalize without the complete name of the institution (unless in a citation or as the first word in a sentence)] Library Search The directors at MUST University go on about how the amount of students ["students" is a countable noun, so remove "amount of ." Try words like "number of," "many," "not as many," and so on] who graduate college [Use graduate from college] end up [Phrasal verb--these two words mean something different from the two words separately (looking up each word in the dictionary would not produce the meaning), which could cause misinterpretation in a business communication if the reader is not from your region (or country). Try different wording, such as "end," "finish," or "result"] with a high debt, and spend most of their paychecks on paying back financial Aid Loans. A point made is that the rate of students in debt is at 400% recently. They feel [Clearer writing suggestion: if "feel" is used in the sense of "to believe or think," it is a cliché and vague; use "believe" or "think"] that they don’t [Contractions are inappropriate in academic
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