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Directions: Read this rough draft of an email your colleague plans to send later this week. Identify its strengths and weaknesses. Then re-write the message to help it be more effective. Don’t forget the subject line! Subject : GetGetting ready for the move Ready! The move will happen this weekend. We’ll be in our new offices when you arrive on Monday. We are hoping to be back at work soon, with everything running smoothly, same production schedule and no late projects or missed deadlines. So you need toPlease, clean out your desk and walls., You may
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Unformatted text preview: put your stuff belongings in the boxes we have provided. , and clean off the walls. You can put the items you had up on your walls in boxes, also. We have provided boxes. The move will happen this weekend. We’ll be in our new offices when you arrive on Monday. We will not be responsible for personal belongings during the move. We are hoping to be back at work soon, with the same production schedule and no missed deadlines. Thank you for your cooperation, David Burke...
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