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com 155 final exam - PLAGERISM REPORT .The third...

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PLAGERISM REPORT The two paragraphs that I read discussed the  personal use of credit cards. The  third  paragraph was well  thought-out  and  constructed.  After  reading  this paragraph,  it  was easy to understand  why people sometimes have trouble getting   credit. This is in contrast to the  fourth  paragraph which was not so well understood. In the  third  paragraph   background information was given on what makes a person credit worthy or not. It was also clearly stated that   individuals with bad credit should  take  the  necessary measures to better their credit situation. It was good to see that  the writer used variety when constructing sentences, which kept the information engaging. It is also worth mentioning  that the third paragraph effectively addressed the issue of poor credit in spite of the fact that there were several  grammatical errors that could have easily been spotted if a few proof reading techniques were used. In contrast the  fourth paragraph attempts to make a good start but then it seems to lose its way or focus. There was very little  information given to support the information presented. Numbers were just tossed out and while they were informative  on the surface, without background information to explain it; it was meaningless. In conclusion, the third paragraph  was formatted and written in a much more clear and concise manner than what is seen in the fourth paragraph. WRITEPOINT REPORT Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also
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This note was uploaded on 08/01/2011 for the course COM 155 taught by Professor Williams during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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