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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? The main topic talks about the energy crisis and what we can do so stop what is happening and help with the crisis. What is the greatest strength of this paper? The first paragraph is very graphic and allows the reader to image what it would be like if they were there. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? All the materials is great for the reader, there just were no counter arguments. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. I did not find any counter arguments about the energy crisis. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I did not see a these statement, I was unable to find one, the author should add one or make one that stands out a little
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Unformatted text preview: more. Where is the writing unclear or vague? I did not understand the part when the author incorporated Mark Twain, I didn’t think that made sense. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? The first paragraph is my favorite because it has great imagery and allows the reader to feel firsthand what it is like and what might happen if power runs out in Alaska. What other comments can you provide for the author? I did not see any cited work throughout the paper. Also there were no visuals throughout the paper. com220r6 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r6...
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