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Amazon[1][1].com+The+Evolution[1]WP - Amazon.com: The...

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Amazon.com: The Evolution 1 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. Running head: AMAZON.COM: THE EVOLUTION Amazon.com: The Evolution
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Amazon.com: The Evolution 2 Learning Team D University of Phoenix Amazon.com: The Evolution Introduction (Bernita Taylor) The Company’s Move Amazon.com began selling books on the internet [Capitalize "Internet" as the worldwide communication network] [Place comma after author's name] ). Since then, the company has pioneered the e-commerce market and by today’s standards is a well established leader in the electronic retail industry. The founder and CEO, Jeff Bezos, had a vision for his company, “Amazon.com will be a place where you can [Place comma after author's name] , p 189). Jeff Bezos’ vision has been the core competency of Amazon.com.
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Amazon.com: The Evolution 3 Twelve [Express numbers higher than nine in digits (when not the first word in the sentence)] years later and after investing $2 billion in the construction of the company infrastructure to support its online store, Amazaon.com realized they were using a very small percentage of its processing capacity. The company decided to offer a portion of its infrastructure to other organizations and began selling processing power and data storage services to help run the technical and logistical side of their business. Some argue whether [Use "if," not "whether." Because "or" does not appear later in the sentence, the situation has one outcome, so there is no "whether" choice] this bold move by Amazon.com is wise. Selling these services thrusts Amazaon.com in direct competition with notable gurus like Google
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