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Self-Revision Process For the revision process, I have included drafts of first body paragraph of paper 2, “Inter-Racial Marriages.” I have changed numerous grammatical, structural mistakes. First, I have revised the few sentences, and added more information to make it clear. Second, I have focused on the structure of all sentences to connect them coherently. Third, I have fixed remaining mistakes, including grammatical errors, sentence structure, and added more detail. Key for self revision process: Need to be revised Being Revised Additional sentences added Comments for the self-revision Draft # 1 “In the U.S. the last anti-miscegenation laws were struck down only in 1967 as a result of the now infamous case Loving v. Virginia” (Company). There were number of cases were registered for interracial marriages after the Loving v. Virginia case. In the United States, there are thousands of people from different ethnic background. Almost all groups intermarry with the respect of their choice, especially in the United States where there is a variety of ethnic groups. For example, my cousin who lives in the United States presently, married to white man after finishing her college. Her son and daughter are mixer of Indian and white race. There may have been conflicts after marrying with family.
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