Week5com156 - Appendix C The paper written on The Dark...

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Appendix C The paper written on The Dark Knight, a movie continuing the Batman series, was a pretty good paper overall. It was a good report with plenty of information about the film. Of the changes that I would make, some spelling would be in need of repair. For instance, the word successful is misspelled in the fourth paragraph. There are some grammar issues, as well. In the first paragraph, the word it’s , which is an adjective, describing possession, should actually be changed to its. It should only carry an apostrophe when it is used as a contraction, (it is or it has). In the fourth paragraph, I would have either wrote out the years in full, (1980’s and 1990’s), or I would have inserted the correct hyphens, (‘80’s and ‘90’s) in the abbreviations. I feel there is some lack of commas, as in the first paragraph, last sentence, after the word ultimately, and in paragraph four, first sentence, after the word darkness . Commas should always be used when making a list such as this for separation. In the second paragraph, the last sentence doesn’t seem to quit.
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