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40178923-COM155-COM-155-Assignment-Final-Assignment (1)

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Com/155 Final Assessment  I read two paragraphs pertaining to personal use of credit cards .   The first paragraph was well  constructed.  When reading it I easily understood why people sometimes have trouble getting  credit.  This is in contrast to the second paragraph which was not so well understood.  In the  first paragraph background information was given on what makes a person credit worthy or not.  It was also clearly stated that individuals with bad credit should fix the situation.  Reasons for  this were quoted from the Fair Credit Reporting Act.   The author used variety when constructing  sentences.  Also the sentences efficiently address the problem of credit. The paragraph, when  written  this   way  was   very  interesting  and   understandable   despite   the  fact   that   there  was  repetitive use of the word “individuals” and that there were several grammatical errors.   The 
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