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Tong 1 Esaias Last Name Katie Sanders ENGL 1301 02/27/2009 Computer operating systems Look up how to capitalize titles In this technological age, almost everyone has a computer. Since 2002 alone, over 1 billion computers have been sold worldwide. (Kanellos, Michael.) This is not how you document sources using parenthetical citation. Behind all this hardware is the computer’s operating system, the magical platform of the computer. It helps to run the various computer applications simultaneously and manages your The directions state to use 3 rd person objective. First and second person are characteristic of persuasive writing. This is a referential paper. computer. The best computer operating system is the one that gives the user the least problems. Use transition. However, determining The best computer operating system is a hard choice, as all the different computer operating systems have their own unique characteristics and specific uses. They have many common features as well as significant differences. When shopping for a computer operating system, the choices are generally one of the main three operating systems: Windows, Mac and Linux. In this choice sparks a question of curiosity - which one is the best operating system? To find out, we will look at both the pros and cons of the three computer operating systems and determine which is the best overall. Instead of pro/cons, try look at certain points that are parallel for all of them. The first operating system in this analysis is Windows. Your topic sentence should also reflect the central idea or question. Although there are many frustrations with Windows, a huge number of loopholes exploited by computer viruses and many bugs in the operating system,
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Tong 2 Windows is still the most popular computer operating system, accounting for over 80% of all computer operating systems in Europe used as of 2011. ("Apple’s operating systems generate almost 1 visit out of 10 in Europe. There is no period in the parenthesis ")period goes here, not after “2011” This may sound as a contradiction, but the explanation for this paradox is fairly simple - most people enjoy the convenience of turning on the same machine, surfing the web on the same browser or playing their favorite computer games on the same platform. Familiarity is necessity. People do not want to switch between different computer operating systems mainly because of the hassle. Besides, most computer software and programs are designed for Windows interface exclusively, which has contributed towards its popular usage. Therefore, it is most popular amongst computer gamers for its compatibility and as a home desktop operating system. Windows is also relatively more expensive compared to Linux use a comma before a conjunction that joins two independent clauses but most versions are cheaper than Mac. (Shelly, Gary B.) this is not how you document For instance, all new versions of Windows 7 are less expensive than Mac OS X Tiger. The recent Windows 7 has many new features, no comma
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