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Critical Information System 1 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. [NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer, not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored.]
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Critical Information Systems 2 Critical Information Systems for Smith Systems Consulting Lori Mixson BSA/310 April 26, 2010 David Sciuto University of Phoenix
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Critical Information Systems 3 Abstract This is a report on the Critical Information Systems for Smith Systems Consulting, this paper will describe [Doctoral-level comment (but recommended for any collegiate writer)--Avoid anthropomorphisms (attributing human characteristics to nonhuman or inanimate objects). Consider that no paper can "describe"] [Doctoral-level comment (but recommended for any collegiate writer)--Avoid anthropomorphisms (attributing human characteristics to nonhuman or inanimate objects). Consider that-- papers cannot "describe"] the critical information system that is [Clearer writing suggestion--Remove "that is"] important to Smiths System Consulting firm. The topics to be covered [The passive voice is a form of "be" (be) and a participle (covered). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Try to use the active voice most often, e.g., the
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