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Unformatted text preview: I take pride in being an Miami Student, and want to read something that is addressed to me in that manner. She used a lot of sources, which is to be expected in a persuasive essay. I liked that she was thinking about her audience through the whole piece. As she states in the foreword “I tried to spark some interest.” It’s nice to know a writer thinks about that. Overall, this was a very good essay, and really caught my attention, and showed me a little more what this next paper is going to be about....
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- Fall '07
- Writing, Miami, Miami University, Lauren Brockmiller