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EricHemlerNarrativeEssay - 1 Eric Hemler Prof. Doersch WRTG...

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Eric Hemler Prof. Doersch WRTG 1150 December 6, 2010 Draft 1 1
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Title I was lost at first with these sentences. Try to insert your photography earlier in your opening paragraph. Just gave me the chills, awesome. What week? Insert a comma but good imagery, I can hear it myself great imagery imagery was used very well in this paragraph I think it should be surrounded in quotations. Ad a boy. Great conclusion.
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Once I hit the highway there is only one goal in my mind: capture them. I have tried to capture them before in different ways. At first I took a class, but the strict guideline hindered my exploration. I than tried to capture them whenever I vacationed, but the set locations made them seem forced. Title I was lost at first with these sentences. Try to insert your photography earlier in your opening paragraph. Just gave me the chills, awesome. What week? Insert a comma but good imagery, I can hear it myself great imagery imagery was used very well in this paragraph I think it should be surrounded in quotations. Ad a boy. Great conclusion.
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One day however, I found the right technique to help me capture beautiful pictures. With my gas tank full and my memory cards empty, I set out in a random direction. Destination unknown. Each time I look through the viewfinder a little bit of stress leaves me and when the stress is gone I don’t have to look for perfect pictures, instead they find me. Title I was lost at first with these sentences. Try to insert your photography earlier in your opening paragraph. Just gave me the chills, awesome. What week? Insert a comma but good imagery, I can hear it myself great imagery imagery was used very well in this paragraph I think it should be surrounded in quotations. Ad a boy. Great conclusion.
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This concept first came to me in the early fall of my last year in high school and it all started with some bad news. The week had dragged onTitle I was lost at first with these sentences. Try to insert your photography earlier in your opening paragraph. Just gave me the chills, awesome.
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This note was uploaded on 08/31/2011 for the course WRITING 1100 taught by Professor Staff during the Fall '10 term at Colorado.

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