Graybeal.PersonalNarrative[1]

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Garrett Graybeal Prof. Doersch WRTG 1150 6 December 2010 Personal Narrative Learning How to Climb 1
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The moon was still high in the sky when my sister, Courtney, came to wake me up. I heard her the whole time though; I had hardly slept a wink that night in anticipation of the adventure I was about to embark on, it reminded me of the many sleepless Christmas Eves when I was younger, my mind busy with all the possibilities the next day might bring. When I heard my door open I forcefully shut my eyes and curled up in a ball under my covers, and when she gently patted my back I did my best impression of a person waking from a long slumber. I slid out of my bed and pulled on the clothes that my family had prescribed for this particular adventure.Should start a new paragraph because new sentence is a new thought. Probably a good idea to start a new paragraph. New idea. Sister’s because good imagery ? ? Start new paragraph New sentence Good imagery but the sentence run ons. I thought it was difficult? Watch contradictory. Realizing your revelation= good stuff
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and I rushed up stairs to the kitchen, where everything happens in my house. My mom had put out a light breakfast for me: yogurt with granola, while my dad sat at the end of the table (as usual) drinking his coffee –– I noted the lack of the newspaper that he always coupled with his coffee, another reminder of how truly early it was. He asked me if I was excited for my day ahead, I tried to stifle my childish enthusiasm and live up to the new “young adult” category that I had just recently been placed in, so I just shrugged and let out a fake yawn followed by a quiet, “Yeah.” I could never fool my dad though, he has always been the best at reading me, and he just smiled, nodded, and went outside to check to see if the paper had been delivered yet. Should start a new paragraph because new sentence is a new thought. Probably a good idea to start a new paragraph. New idea. Sister’s because good imagery ? ? Start new paragraph New sentence Good imagery but the sentence run ons. I thought it was difficult? Watch contradictory. Realizing your revelation= good stuff
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While I was eating, a couple of my sistersShould start a new paragraph because new sentence is a new thought. Probably a good idea to start a new paragraph. New idea. Sister’s because good imagery ?
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