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Unformatted text preview: choosing a topic that isn’t action-oriented (you can’t just propose what to do; you’ve got to include how to do it); and confusing the secondary audience with the stakeholders (stakeholders are affected by the course of action, not part of the decision-making process). CONTENT Needs improvement OK Presented idea convincingly! Addressed assignment completely. Answered Questions thoroughly and thoughtfully. Kept intro short and sharply focused. Included goodwill in the conclusion. FORMATTING Needs improvement OK Easy to find your answers! Strong visual appeal. Used my questions as your Headings. Used correct memo format. Kept paragraphs short. Single-spaced within paragraphs; left a line-space between paragraphs MECHANICS and USAGE Needs improvement OK Do not detract from credibility! TONE and STYLE Needs improvement OK Well crafted! Professional but not stuffy. Easy to read....
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- Spring '08
- Thought, Needs Improvement