Reflection of the W piece

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Unformatted text preview: Reflection of the W piece Even though this was my best paper, I decided to revise it because I there were things that needed to be changed. For example, it was originally titled Four Seasons Fountain because I thought thats what the fountain was called. Upon realizing the name was wrong, I changed it to Fountain of the Four Seasons which is the actual name if the fountain so it seemed to be a fitting title. In addition, in the section where I was talking about the restoration of the fountain, I took out the source I used because I found an overwhelming number of articles that state that the restoration actually started in 1996. Also in that section I found that the process cost $250,000, not $200,000, and that the money came from the classes of 1946-1948 and 1998. In this revision, I did a lot of deleting, but in most cases I just rewrote them. A perfect In this revision, I did a lot of deleting, but in most cases I just rewrote them....
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This note was uploaded on 09/05/2011 for the course ENGL 150 taught by Professor Alexwerner during the Fall '08 term at Iowa State.

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