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Unformatted text preview: better words/phrases and fixed my sentences by condensing them or making them into multiple sentences. Once I did this I had a buddy of mine in my dorm read my essay to me, just as in the peer review. It seemed much smoother than before and I actually liked it this time around. Since my rough draft was indeed a rough draft I made sure in this essay that all of the research I had looked at was incorporated into my writing. I feel as if I am meeting the expectations and requirements of this essay quite well and have connected back to the idea of higher education throughout my essay. I feel that the unit was fair and it was definitely something new to me that I had never tried with my writing before, and I also feel that it challenged me a bit, which turned out to be a good thing....
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- Spring '11