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Unformatted text preview: editing we did showed me that I still needed a lot of work on my essay so I took the advice/feedback from our peer edits and began my revised draft, using both their advice and my own ideas to improve my essay, in which I feel I met the criteria of the overall assignment quite well. Based on my peer edits I mainly expanded on my explanations of my own personal writing skills just as well as the writing I will be asked to do in college. I also tried to explain more on why the experiences that I have been through helped me as a writer. I felt that the unit was quite clear personally and I had no troubles with it whatsoever. I would like you to know that my writing is mainly influenced by the experiences that I have been through and there tends to be a lot of emotion. I do get caught up in those experiences and may get off topic at times....
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This note was uploaded on 09/05/2011 for the course ENGLISH 101 taught by Professor Bailey during the Spring '11 term at Boise State.
- Spring '11