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Unformatted text preview: Explain your answer. The author could add more examples of exercises, like pointing out that even walking up and down the stairs is exercise, or doing your yard work is physical activity, it does not have to be someone going to a gym or using exercise equipment at home. Where is the writing unclear or vague? There is nothing that is unclear or vague that I seen. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? I do not have one. What other comments might you provide for the author? I am not sure I would call losing weight the magic formula, there are many people out there that exercise all the time, and eat good foods, yet have a hard time keeping the weight off for whatever reason. They just can not do it. COM 150 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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This note was uploaded on 09/09/2011 for the course ENGLISH com140 taught by Professor Harv during the Spring '11 term at A.T. Still University.
- Spring '11