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Unformatted text preview: comparing what you have written to the thesis writing instructions in Troubleshooting Guide. 4 Does the essay provide sufficient paraphrased and quoted references to the reading? Yes No Paragraph structure for your first body paragraph looks good. 5 Does the essay provide sufficient and relevant experiences to support or challenge points made about the reading? Yes No 6 Does the conclusion discuss the implications of what is written in the body of the essay Yes No 7 Is the essay logically structured? Yes No second body paragraph contains no topic sentence, but the remaining structure looks better. Comments: 1 You need to use academic formatting. See the template that I have posted for this purpose and use it for all of your courses. You use the wrong font and the wrong font size....
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This note was uploaded on 09/10/2011 for the course ENG 209 taught by Professor Staff during the Spring '11 term at S.F. State.
- Spring '11