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Unformatted text preview: African Americans and Native Americans similarly. Also, African Americans were mistreated by voters. 5. Run-on Sentence (R-O) Incorrect Correct [ Raoul tried his best this time that wasn't good enough. ] R-O Raoul tried his best this time. Yet this attempt wasn’t good enough. 6. Start a new paragraph. ¶ 7. Tense (T) Incorrect Correct He comes into the room and he pulled a gun. T He came into the room and he pulled a gun. 8. Repetition (Rep): unnecessary wording or sentences. Incorrect Correct The shirt was blue [ in color. ] Rep The shirt was blue. 9. Capitalization (Cap): start new sentences and names with capital letters. Incorrect Correct chinese are a fair people. and they are a fun group. Cap Chinese are a fair people. And they are a fun group. 10. Word Choice (WC) Incorrect Correct China and it’s people are lovely. WC China and its people are lovely....
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- Spring '11
- Native Americans in the United States, White American, Southern United States