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Unformatted text preview: male squirrels are like other animals who are only needed to help reproduce. I believe that with further research in that subcategory, the author could have outlined a better understanding on squirrel behavior. This essay was a solid piece to reflect what an exploratory essay should demonstrate and was able to outline various topics while keeping it coherent and connected. This piece revealed how a large topic can be narrowed down, yet still provide all the details necessary to write a solid paper. I believe that this piece was much better than the "Polygamy" piece we recently read. In comparison, this piece transistioned smoothly from one category to the next and provided quality information with support on the red squirrel while using personal experiences; while the other piece was more rambled and seemed bias, this piece did not have a sense of bias....
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This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course ENG 102 taught by Professor Molly during the Fall '10 term at Boise State.
- Fall '10