SPCM 1100 Notes 5

SPCM 1100 Notes 5 - Informative Speech Example 2 Thesis Be...

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9/16/10 Informative Speech- Example 2 Thesis - Be more specific about “current findings” and “past data” Main Points I. Refer to specific data a. Provide more specific examples about the species being affected b. Explain hypoxia in more detail c. Expand on what the committees are doing to find a solution d. Move point B from the 2 nd main point to the 1 st main point e. Don’t lead off with Oceanographer b/c its too specific and then the sub-points become too general II. Eliminate the information about marine life (covered in 1 st main point) a. Explain how it will cost taxpayers and businesses b. Which businesses will be affected? i. Restaurants ii. Tourism c. How does it affect taxpayers? i. State utilizing money to clean up or prevention d. How significant is that? e. Stats III.Add point about effect on human health a. Fishermen b. Can’t eat fish c. Health of clean-up workers d. What is the underlying cause? Why? Transitions
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