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Joe Wallace 11/25/07 English 101 Professor Wilson Conferences The first essay we wrote was the memoir. I liked writing that essay very much because it reminded me of great memories of my past. In terms of a memoir I need to put more of a personal connection into the paper. I have to discuss how these memories and past events shaped me personally. I think it will fit nicely in the end of my essay and will sum it up in a more intimate way. Otherwise I really like the direction of the essay and the examples and details I used throughout the paper. The next essay was a letter I wrote about global warming. I need to take a little more time to tie this paper all together. I think I have a good base and now I just need to give more detail in some spots and just make my ideas stronger. I am very fascinated by global warming so I really want to try to take some of that passion and show it in my paper. I learned a lot about it and I want to show how I was affected by the possible dangers of global warming. Some of my essays are just a little to short, but I think with
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This note was uploaded on 09/09/2011 for the course COMM 88 taught by Professor Jansma during the Winter '08 term at UCSB.

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