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Unformatted text preview: interesting for the reader. Also you used your title effectively by explaining it throughout the paper. You might try to leave out some of he facts about her previous marriages, but I like that you talked about her and Joe DiMaggio because that was such a big deal at the time and had such an effect on American culture that it fit into the idea of your essay perfectly. At times it is unclear how you are going to make a connection to a greater trend, issue, or problem, but I felt you did a nice job at the end bringing it all together and focusing it under one theme making it clear to the reader your intentions. Overall I felt you did an excellent job on your paper. Good Luck, Joe Wallace...
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- Fall '11
- English, English-language films, Marilyn Monroe, Nice job, Joe Wallace