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Unformatted text preview: certain aspects that the writer wished to address. His thesis statement is non-existent in this essay. There is not one sentence in the introduction that summarizes what he will speak of throughout the essay. My recommendation to this student would be for him to first draw out an outline of the paper first. Identify his introduction, body and conclusion. He should then summarize the body in one sentence and add that at the end of his introduction to provide an adequate thesis statement. My only other note on this essay would be that I thought the student was asking for help in the wrong areas. He should have asked for help in bettering his sentence structures and making his essay more cohesive. There were also several spelling areas that should have been covered....
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- Spring '11