Unformatted text preview: problems. I would need to know from you : what do you want to be the focus of your paper? How did you tie each part to the thesis? Is the movement from sentence from sentence clear? And how can you make this paragraph more focused on just one or two topics....
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This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course LEARNING L 110 taught by Professor Afrancis during the Spring '11 term at Community College of Philadelphia.
- Spring '11