lab7ls - problems I would need to know from you what do you...

Info iconThis preview shows page 1. Sign up to view the full content.

View Full Document Right Arrow Icon
Your first sentence which is general, is about prophets and appears to be your thesis. Your paper talks about Nostrodomos' predictions. The conclusion suggests that there should be a re-doing of the thesis, so that it includes a direction which leads to the end thought of the paper. This paper is about Nostrodomos, but you suggest that we as individuals should take heed to such predictions. You have some minor grammatical
Background image of page 1
This is the end of the preview. Sign up to access the rest of the document.

Unformatted text preview: problems. I would need to know from you : what do you want to be the focus of your paper? How did you tie each part to the thesis? Is the movement from sentence from sentence clear? And how can you make this paragraph more focused on just one or two topics....
View Full Document

This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course LEARNING L 110 taught by Professor Afrancis during the Spring '11 term at Community College of Philadelphia.

Ask a homework question - tutors are online