Unformatted text preview: I think that this paper needs a rewrite and not just a revision. The organization of the paper is a mess. I would have her do a five-paragraph essay, with an introduction containing a summary of the novel. I would recommend that she use one or two direct quotes. Using direct quotes have always helped me clarify for myself and for my reader exactly what I am trying to say. In using direct quotes, you need make it very clear why you are using that quote by introducing it, quoting it, and then explaining it. If you do once or twice you already have one or two good paragraphs. I also find it helpful to break up my essay into paragraphs in order to organize my information....
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- Spring '11