Unformatted text preview: LAB #8 Online Tutoring - Essay Two Tutor Assessment of Paper Submitted The English 101 student seeking online tutoring has a very serious problem. Based on the quality of writing in the essay paper submitted by this English 101 student, her writing skill falls somewhere between the English 97 and 98 remedial level. Because of student's perceived level of competence in writing, an online tutoring environment is not the best choice for her. It is doubtful that all of the problems with the essay could be resolved online within a practical time frame because of the amount of work to be done and the limitations of online tutoring. Tutor will do what is possible in this first online session and then make a recommendation to the student for future tutoring assistance. Online Tutor Response to Student There is a tremendous amount of basic work to be done on your paper. The problems which are numerous, include poor grammar, spelling errors, organization, insufficient content, etc. I have placed lines through the first paragraph of poor grammar, spelling errors, organization, insufficient content, etc....
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This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course LEARNING L 110 taught by Professor Afrancis during the Spring '11 term at Community College of Philadelphia.
- Spring '11