Lab8gb - synopsis would help the paper's organization Eliminating redundancy and minor grammatical correction would help in improving the work

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The first question I would ask is whether the paper is intended to be a book report or a personal reaction. Secondly, while runon sentences don't seem to be the problem grammar and organization need to be looked at more closely. A better chronological order in the
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Unformatted text preview: synopsis would help the paper's organization. Eliminating redundancy and minor grammatical correction would help in improving the work already done. A summing-up conclusion would give a necessary finishing touch. Gwyneth Bacon...
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This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course LEARNING L 110 taught by Professor Afrancis during the Spring '11 term at Community College of Philadelphia.

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