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Leticia Smith Lab eight First of all there are a lot of different issues that need to be dealt with in your paper that I am not sure can be addressed online. My first suggestion to you is to make sure you discus what we talk about here on line, with a tutor that you can sit down face to face with. Developing and organizing your topics is a must here, you jump subjects within a paragraph too often. The need to follow through with a thought will help you out a lot. For example: In this novel Ofelia Santoro is Gabriel's mother. He bought her a bike for her Birthday. Gabriel ran away from home. So, his mother would dress in all black and take her bike out at night to look for her fourteen-year-old son. Ofelia became really good friends with a priest and he would walk the streets at night to help her look for her son. Sometimes Gabriel would watch from the El, but he never said a word to her. She did everything that she could possibly do to find her son. Here is an example where within a paragraph you jump from Ofelia to Gabriel
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This note was uploaded on 09/13/2011 for the course LEARNING L 110 taught by Professor Afrancis during the Spring '11 term at Community College of Philadelphia.

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