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Unformatted text preview: Bill was supposed to meet us at this hotel. (The verb is active.) 7. My rsum is submitted with this letter. Revised: I am submitting my rsum with this letter. 8. People were nice to me when I worked at the bookstore. People were nice to me when I worked at the bookstore. (The verb is active.) 9. When I worked at the hospital, overtime was paid to some employees. Revised: When I worked at the hospital, some employees earned overtime. 10. I had been working for five days when the solution was found by someone in our department. Revised: I had been working for five days when someone in our department found the solution....
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This note was uploaded on 09/20/2011 for the course COMM 2290 taught by Professor All during the Spring '11 term at Saint Mary's University Texas.
- Spring '11