Unformatted text preview: Enclosed is my résumé for your review. 5. Pursuant to my final conversation with Mr. Ryan, I sought the aid of our lawyer. Revised: Following on my final conversation with Mr. Ryan, I asked our lawyer for help. 6. I am cognizant of the fact that you will be sending the parcel under separate cover. Revised : I know that you will be sending the parcel separately . 7. The remuneration for a full-time worker depends on the wage scale implemented by the employer. Revised : The pay for a full-time worker depends on the wage scale the employer uses. 8. As per your request, we will forward your comments to the employee. Revised : As you requested, we will send your comments to the employee....
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- Spring '11
- supervisor, Mr. Ryan, full-time worker, wage scale, final conversation