Parallel Structure - Exercise 7 Parallel Structure Correct the parallel structure problems in these sentences 1 This package contains directions

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Exercise 7: Parallel Structure Correct the parallel structure problems in these sentences. 1. This package contains directions for the mower and the warranty. Revision: This package contains the warranty and directions for the mower. 2. At Dalplex, you can use the climbing wall, take lessons in tennis, and a bartending course is available. Revision: At Dalplex, you can use the climbing wall, take lessons in tennis, and attend a bartending course. 3. Weaknesses in my writing include lack of motivation, problems putting my thoughts on paper, and my spelling is not good. Revision: Weaknesses in my writing include lack of motivation, problems putting my thoughts on paper, and incorrect spelling. 4. The décor of the Crown Bistro is less appealing to my eye than Willow's restaurant. Revision: The décor of the Crown Bistro is less appealing to my eye than that of Willow’s restaurant. 5. What I hope to accomplish in this course is proper sentence structure and to be able to be clear and concise in my writing. Revision:
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This note was uploaded on 09/20/2011 for the course COMM 2290 taught by Professor All during the Spring '11 term at Saint Mary's University Texas.

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Parallel Structure - Exercise 7 Parallel Structure Correct the parallel structure problems in these sentences 1 This package contains directions

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