Wordiness - Exercise 2: Wordiness Rewrite these sentences...

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Exercise 2: Wordiness Rewrite these sentences using more economical language. 1. I am writing this letter to inform you that I did not send you my final payment in view of the fact that the lawnmower doesn’t work. Revised : I didn’t send you my final payment because the lawn mower doesn’t work. 2. We haven’t yet reached a conclusion about which candidate we should hire. Revised : We haven’t yet concluded which candidate we should hire. 3. Business writing differs from other types of writing mainly due to the fact that it takes the reader into consideration. Revised : Business writing differs from other types of writing mainly because it considers the reader. 4. This is to inform you that at this point in time, we do not know who will buy the mill in view of the fact that we haven’t advertised it yet. Revised : Right now, we don’t know who will buy the mill because we haven’t advertised it yet.
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