Peer Review - Your organizational skills was well put...

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Date: July 21, 2010 From: Jennifer Edwards To: Diane Smith Re: Peer Review I read over your paper and I think it was very well written. I like when you go into great detail about author’s discriminations on mother’s and how the author was neglected as a child. Your thesis is great, but you could have gone into a little more detail other than that it was great.
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Unformatted text preview: Your organizational skills was well put together and all your quotations was all in the right places. I think your paper had some very good points especially when you criticized that the author had issues with mothers and the way they take care of there children. To close I will say that you did and excellent job on your paper....
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