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IRW 9/22/09
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Overview Thesis Statements Vocabulary Review Thesis Statements Scope/Concise Review “Home Cookin’” Thesis Samples Review Restaurant Review Essay Th/TS Sort Thesis/Topic Sentence Outline “BTM”
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Vocabulary Review Narrative Expository Perspective Thesis Statement (Th) Central Idea (CI) Topic Sentence (TS) Main Idea (MI)
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Why  CI  is important? Your perspective What you are put out in  exposition Ties the essay together Focuses the reader Focuses the writer
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More Concise? Thesis:   In Leslie Marmon Silko’s, Ceremony she uses color to portray Tayo's  feelings and emotions about his  experiences with the environment,  people, and events.
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1) Be Concise “feelings and emotions”   EMOTIONS “his experiences with the environment,  people, and events” EXPERIENCES 2) Be Specific colors feelings
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ORIGINAL: In Leslie Marmon Silko’s,  Ceremony , she uses color to portray  Tayo's feelings and emotions about his  experiences with the environment,  people, and events. REVISED: In Ceremony , Leslie Marmon  Silko uses the colors of nature to  portray Tayo's feelings of  disconnection.
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THESIS: The aura of food was simple yet  fantastic just the same, from the artichokes  to the cornbread, the meal was executed  like a back country feast. When I arrived, the scene that was presented to me  was a sense of comfort and relaxation. The ribs and other entrees brought a great smell in  the light wind from the kitchen window. Finally, I got a hold of the ribs.
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Day_8 - IRW 9/22/09 Overview ThesisStatements...

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