com150_appendix_g(1)

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point for this essay is the diversity in the united states, and all of the different languages that are becoming more frequent in the united states. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength in this essay is the introduction. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes the introduction grabbed my attention. I never knew that there were so many different languages forming in the united states. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? There is no material that does not support the main point of this essay. Where should the author add more details or examples?
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Unformatted text preview: Explain your answer. I think the author should add more details where the author speaks about the educational system. Where is the writing unclear or vague? From what I read I did not think there was any writing that was unclear. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite part was when the author stated the issues of the foreign language becoming more frequent in the united states. What other comments might you provide for the author? Add more detail when it comes to the educational part of this writing. COM 150 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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