New Final Course Project Topic Proposal

New Final Course Project Topic Proposal - people face is...

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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. My new final course topic is going to be a fitness center with a daycare. The reason I chose this topic is that The River View Plaza can sustain 1300 people when the building is full. Currently people are always looking for time to work out and get in shape. The problem most
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Unformatted text preview: people face is time and distance. If it were I, I know once my day is over from work the last thing I want to do is drive to the gym to work out and have no one to watch my children. Now, on the other hand if the gym were in the same building I worked in, I could work out more, if not every day or before I have to work. People today are looking for convenience and location. In addition, if there was a daycare in the building or, just for people coming to work out. I believe more people would come to the gym. It is hard for people sometimes to find a babysitter just to go to the gym and work out, especially for single parents. I believe this would benefit everyone in the building and promote good health. This would also help employees who work in the building and have children that need a daycare....
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This note was uploaded on 09/25/2011 for the course COM 140 COM 140 taught by Professor Dorsey,c during the Spring '09 term at University of Phoenix.

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