Carb_Cutter_Peer_Review - Stephanie Pham 2/24/11 Biol 1103...

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Stephanie Pham 2/24/11 Biol 1103 L Carb Cutter Draft: Peer Review for Kate Anna Akins Draft Requirements o Good lead in and attention grabbing sentence: everyone is worried about bathing suit season! o Good explanation of how carb cutter works- and simple enough for the average person to understand. o Explanation of the experiment is a little hard to understand. I know what you’re talking about because I did the experiment too, but for the average “reader”, they probably would be very confused as to what the experimental method was. It needs to be explained better Explain what a spectrometer does exactly, and what the implications of the light transmittance is- what does that mean for the starch concentration? – because later in your results section, you mention that “more light was transmitted than absorbed”- that needs to be explained to readers. In discussing the testing of the tubes, mention something about a reaction: how Carb Cutter is supposed to stop the reaction completely at certain periods of time. It would be more clearer than just saying that the tubes were “tested.”
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