Appendix G - The author used great details, statistics and...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? Gun control laws have cost many people their lives because they were unable to protect themselves. Gun control laws need to be redesigned and less strict. What is the greatest strength of this paper? I think the greatest strength of this paper is the statistical facts given at the beginning. The introduction was also very strong, grabbing my attention. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I think the entire paper fits good together, the transitions are clear and the main points are organized well. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. I do believe both arguments have been sufficiently addressed. During reading the paper, I did have counterarguments I thought about, but then they were addressed. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer.
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Unformatted text preview: The author used great details, statistics and facts to support his/her main points. If there were any more included, I believe the reader would lose interest or forget the main points. Where is the writing unclear or vague? There were no points which were vague or unclear to me while reading. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite part of the writing was the strongest parts, the statistical facts and the introduction. These points grabbed my attention, and kept me reading. What other comments can you provide for the author? This is a very well written paper, including many facts and details. I enjoyed reading this writing and learning more about the common issues associated with gun control. *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r3 com220r3...
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