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Unformatted text preview: After my afternoon class, I diligently worked through the essay, making the adjustments I had previously made the best that I could. This essay represents about two hours of editing, and I think it shows. I believe that it is adequate, but I am extremely disappointed that I am unable to showcase my true ability. I think that I accomplished all of the goals outlined in the instructions. I described the scene, the content of the speech, the purposes and the effects. As I said before, I believe it to be scaled and watered down. I simply played the hand that was dealt to me, and that was all I could do. I hope you will take that into consideration as you read and score it. I dont believe that the time and effort I put into the paper is revealed in the final copy, but such is life. I simply live to fight another day....
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- Spring '07